in my honest opinion

ThreeStar saved this

19 gave me a boner

really funny short. ine way you could improve is making mario look more retro. this would make the shorts more funny. trust me

i like the idea, but

the game seems too simplistic. the following could help you improve the flash:

-making the game keyboard-controlled

-add a symbol instead of a box with arrows

-adding sounds and music

-creating backgrounds for stages

the above could make this flash game very fun and a good time-killer

I myself am not big into pornographic flash

but this is still good. the 3D animation is outstanding and the different endings are a great extra. good job. the only thing that needs improvemet is the grammer. one thig that would make this better is if you made it more of a mission-like structure. like if you added certain objectives you had to do by certain times to continue or earn extra items and scenes. this would make the game much better

unfortunately

i found it to be boring. a few things you dound work on is maybe making a betting score system based on timing anf make them all the same size. these will most likely help you.

genious

have you ever though of making mixes for professionals?

you have have gotten a 4/5

but i'm a huge sonic fan 5/5