in my honest opinion
ThreeStar saved this
19 gave me a boner
really funny short. ine way you could improve is making mario look more retro. this would make the shorts more funny. trust me
honestly, i thought this was gonna be bad, but it totally caught me off guard. this was nothing i expected. great job. there is not much to improve on, but if you were to improve, i would bring the words in at the same time as the panel. this will benefit you by not wearing the patience of some viewers
Fair point AppleMasacre - I did build in a skip function - clicking anywhere on the page during the load sequences skip ahead to the finished state of the page, in case viewers get impatient. There's also a lofi version on my website - check it out, if you like.
And thanks for the good words!
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.