in my honest opinion
ThreeStar saved this
19 gave me a boner
really funny short. ine way you could improve is making mario look more retro. this would make the shorts more funny. trust me
honestly, i thought this was gonna be bad, but it totally caught me off guard. this was nothing i expected. great job. there is not much to improve on, but if you were to improve, i would bring the words in at the same time as the panel. this will benefit you by not wearing the patience of some viewers
Fair point AppleMasacre - I did build in a skip function - clicking anywhere on the page during the load sequences skip ahead to the finished state of the page, in case viewers get impatient. There's also a lofi version on my website - check it out, if you like.
And thanks for the good words!
i like the idea, but
the game seems too simplistic. the following could help you improve the flash:
-making the game keyboard-controlled
-add a symbol instead of a box with arrows
-adding sounds and music
-creating backgrounds for stages
the above could make this flash game very fun and a good time-killer
I myself am not big into pornographic flash
but this is still good. the 3D animation is outstanding and the different endings are a great extra. good job. the only thing that needs improvemet is the grammer. one thig that would make this better is if you made it more of a mission-like structure. like if you added certain objectives you had to do by certain times to continue or earn extra items and scenes. this would make the game much better
i found it to be boring. a few things you dound work on is maybe making a betting score system based on timing anf make them all the same size. these will most likely help you.
this song is fuggin sick
have you ever though of making mixes for professionals?
you have have gotten a 4/5
but i'm a huge sonic fan 5/5
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